I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Tuesday, November 23, 2021
Friday, November 19, 2021
Found Poem
Thursday, November 18, 2021
This Is Just To Say Poem
this is just to say
I am sorry for taking
the 143 story tree-house
book from mum's
bed room
I hid the book under
my T-shirt
and you did not know
Forgive me
I was really desperate
to read it I am sorry
Wednesday, November 17, 2021
Tuesday, November 16, 2021
Ponaturi
My creature from falling into Rarohenga is the Ponaturi. The Ponaturi is a water person that lives in the underwater village. They helped a boy called Kae and made a waka and then went under the surface. The boy Kae thought they were mermaids. The boy Kae played a song for the Ponaturi and they hummed to the music.
In Maori History the ponaturi are a group of Hostile creatures and they look like goblins.
They spend most of their time in the water.
They come out of the water to sleep in the evening sun.
They are in a number of stories like: the story of Tawhaki.
In the story of falling into Rarohenga the ponaturi helped a boy needed to get across The river and they gave him a boat as a thank you for the song he sang for them.
Falling Into Rarohenga: The Ponaturi
The Ponaturi is a part of the story of falling into Rarohenga they helped a boy called Kae to get across the river to find his sister Tui. Tui went with a Taniwha and it had paua coloured eyes. Kae was singing a song for the Ponaturi and they hummed to the music. The river of Rarohenga is where the Ponaturi live and they live in a village at the bottom of the river.
The story of the Ponaturi
Ponaturi was in New Zealand for a long time. Now they are a legend and New Zealanders believe that they were real and I believe in them as well. When a boy called Kae sang to a ponaturi and then more came and hummed to the sound of the ukulele Kae was playing.
Friday, November 5, 2021
Writing✏
Joyfully, Ellie was happy as a smiling ball.
Silently, Bella walked into the house quiet as a mouse.
Slowly, Lily-Anne walked around the church to fire a Nerf bullet at her next victim.
Carefully, Sam walked to shot Lily-Anne with a Nerf bullet from his hiding place.
Tuesday, November 2, 2021
15 Wrighting and -ING sentence✏
On Friday me, Ellie and Isabelle went to my dads house until Sunday afternoon. At my dads house they had a turtle called Boris and my dad tolled me not to put my finger in the water or he will bite me. On Saturday we all went shopping. On Sunday we all waited for my mum to pick us up. Her is a -ING sentence. Purring happily, Bella was happy to see me, Ellie and Isabelle. 🐢🏠👪